Lady Sydney

Hmm... I thought this was good, though it could be better. This actually seemed more Narrative than Dramatic. I just thought it told more of a story, rather than expressing ...

Well, we're quite happy that you stumbled upon our little site. ^_^ I'm Sydney; if you have any questions, feel free to PM me at anytime. I look forward to ...

Nice, nice. I'm not too sure that I know what exactly this is about, :? but it still seemed interesting.

Haha! Cute. ^_^ I've never seen anyone post jokes before. Good work! ^_^

I loved it. ^_^ This was my favorite line: I smile when the red wings of a phoenix pierce through the suffocating vaccuum of the night. That was fantastic description ...

I liked it! :D Nice, simple, and easy to follow. Well done!

This is an interesting idea, though I think it needs a better rhythm. You have some lines longer than others, so it kind of threw me off. Other than that, ...

XD I am. Nice choice of emoticon, by the way. :wink:

That was a powerful ending. Or at least to me, it was. The "die as one" was what really got my attention, so great job there. I'm guessing that this ...

Lol. Nice, shotgun. :wink: Good luck with your finals, guys! Come back to the site in one piece, ok pie? Bye! ~*Sydney*~ PS. I agree with your title. Mid-terms; yeesh. ...

Er... I don't know about this. It doesn't seem to poetic to me, and it left no impact. It's like one of those "Do's and Don'ts of Life" kind of ...

All bases have pretty much been touched, so I won't echo. ^_^ I loved this from your first word to your last period. Extremely well done! I'm not really sure ...

Lol I think I missed this post. >.< Sorry! Welcome to the site. Even though you aren't too new anymore. :wink: I'm Sydney. If you have any questions, which I ...

Hehe. Nice SWY shirt, Razor! Lol. And I like the darker hair on you, Sam. :wink: Awesome gun, by the way. ~Syd

I did something like this before for some class that my friend goes to; I just so happen to be going there WITH her the day that they wrote these. ...